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Between the Lines's avatar

Wow, this felt like a short film I’d want to rewatch on a quiet Sunday.

The world you created so vivid and textured, gargi and sahir felt like real people I might’ve met once and never forgotten. Every sentence breathes, from the gola wala to two worldviews colliding on a moving train learning and unlearning, it was so human.

This is the kind of writing that makes you slow down. Loved it :))

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Janvi's avatar

loved this, so cute

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